coba deh di outline lagi story nya..trus yang rasanya kurang penting di bikin lebih pendek aja wi..intro nya di pendekin lagi.. kalo kepanjangan bikin reader nya males baca ny ntar wi
thank a lot for your advice bang andres ^-^that's very helpful..i'll determine it :)
I Like the way you develop the story :)nice.
thanks a lot eci:)
I like your story,,,you could make me cry because of this story,, ;)
really??i'd love to see your tears...hahaha:)could you please crying again for me?? i'd like to see your expression....
I like your story... I can imagine how two people still love each other even when they are separated away for long, long time...... good story... :)
thanks a lot siti for imagining my story in your mind..hahaha:)
Great..I like your story and I can feel the situation as Mrs. Josephine.I will wait for your next story.
thanks for waiting my next story..haha..are you really feel the situation as Mrs.Josephine??:)
OMG i like your story... the ending is sooO touching... (T_T)_bby the way i feel sorry for Mr. Oliver, he is just a victim between these two lovers...wkwkkwkwkwk........
haha..thanks so much for your compliment, ozi..actually, i also feel sorry for Mr.Oliver. he must be sorrow!
WOW....!!!What a amazing story is...!!! :DI could not imagine how did you injure your mind to make this story uwi.. :DI think it was very hurtful.. :DGreat imagination... *_*Keep fighting.. :-D
yes! you right..i really injured my mind to write it, but it doesn't matter since you like my story..thanks a lot:)
amazing..!!!!! amazing...!!!! I like your story. I am imagining WIWIT become Mr. Oliver,, :) and Ozy as Mrs. Josephine.. hahaha...
Heeyyyyy.....What do you mean?? >_<
haha.. i agree with you meg..thanks for your comment:)
nice story uwi...I really wanna know...will Mr.Richard marry Mrs.Josephin then??
if you wanna know, i should injured my mind again to continue the story..hahathanks a lot for your comment before
Wow. what an interesting story Uwi. I like it.I feel like I am being involved in your story when I read it. Greatgood job Uwi.
thanks for your compliment ridha...i happy if you feel that you involved in my my story:)
nice story uwi :Dbtw, how about the ending of Mr. Richard and Mrs Josephine?? will they be married?? o.Okeep fighting ahjumma xDD
thanks a lot ahjussi..if you want to know what will happen next, i should injured my mind again to write the continue of the story..hahaha:)
interesting story uwi... i like the way you develop it... keep writing. i willl be waiting for your next story... :)
thanks for waiting for my next story yayang...:)
This is such an amazing story, but you should use justify. Btw, keep writing. ^_^
coba deh di outline lagi story nya..
BalasHapustrus yang rasanya kurang penting di bikin lebih pendek aja wi..
intro nya di pendekin lagi.. kalo kepanjangan bikin reader nya males baca ny ntar wi
thank a lot for your advice bang andres ^-^
Hapusthat's very helpful..i'll determine it :)
I Like the way you develop the story :)
BalasHapusnice.
thanks a lot eci:)
HapusI like your story,,,
BalasHapusyou could make me cry because of this story,, ;)
really??
Hapusi'd love to see your tears...hahaha:)
could you please crying again for me?? i'd like to see your expression....
I like your story... I can imagine how two people still love each other even when they are separated away for long, long time...... good story... :)
BalasHapusthanks a lot siti for imagining my story in your mind..hahaha:)
HapusGreat..
BalasHapusI like your story and I can feel the situation as Mrs. Josephine.
I will wait for your next story.
thanks for waiting my next story..
Hapushaha..are you really feel the situation as Mrs.Josephine??:)
OMG i like your story... the ending is sooO touching... (T_T)_b
BalasHapusby the way i feel sorry for Mr. Oliver, he is just a victim between these two lovers...
wkwkkwkwkwk........
haha..thanks so much for your compliment, ozi..
Hapusactually, i also feel sorry for Mr.Oliver. he must be sorrow!
WOW....!!!
BalasHapusWhat a amazing story is...!!! :D
I could not imagine how did you injure your mind to make this story uwi.. :D
I think it was very hurtful.. :D
Great imagination... *_*
Keep fighting.. :-D
yes! you right..
Hapusi really injured my mind to write it, but it doesn't matter since you like my story..
thanks a lot:)
amazing..!!!!! amazing...!!!! I like your story.
BalasHapusI am imagining WIWIT become Mr. Oliver,, :) and Ozy as Mrs. Josephine.. hahaha...
Heeyyyyy.....
HapusWhat do you mean?? >_<
haha.. i agree with you meg..
Hapusthanks for your comment:)
nice story uwi...
BalasHapusI really wanna know...
will Mr.Richard marry Mrs.Josephin then??
if you wanna know, i should injured my mind again to continue the story..haha
Hapusthanks a lot for your comment before
Wow. what an interesting story Uwi. I like it.
BalasHapusI feel like I am being involved in your story when I read it. Great
good job Uwi.
thanks for your compliment ridha...
Hapusi happy if you feel that you involved in my my story:)
nice story uwi :D
BalasHapusbtw, how about the ending of Mr. Richard and Mrs Josephine?? will they be married?? o.O
keep fighting ahjumma xDD
thanks a lot ahjussi..
Hapusif you want to know what will happen next, i should injured my mind again to write the continue of the story..hahaha:)
interesting story uwi... i like the way you develop it... keep writing. i willl be waiting for your next story... :)
BalasHapusthanks for waiting for my next story yayang...:)
HapusThis is such an amazing story, but you should use justify. Btw, keep writing. ^_^
BalasHapus